Well, after that poll on dA I think it's probably best for me not to post my whole story online, just in case, but I don't think there's anything wrong with posting excerpts from a still rough draft. So, here's a little bit from flashback of Jordan and Hill's time at the lab, right before their escape.
(Over-abuse of the word "had," what's up?)
( Jordan liked Hill; he liked him much more than his previous researcher who’d the warmth of the cold, metal instruments that he used. But something about that day, about the very mood in the air, made Jordan reject his usual routine.Collapse )